Comments on: Flash Fiction: Story takes a 5-minute potty break http://alarichammell.com/flash-fiction-story-takes-5-minute-potty-break/ web home for a quixotic flâneur, footloose amateur and wannabe raconteur Tue, 02 Dec 2014 03:44:42 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=4.0.4 By: Mia http://alarichammell.com/flash-fiction-story-takes-5-minute-potty-break/#comment-380 Thu, 02 Jan 2014 08:04:39 +0000 http://alarichammell.com/?p=120#comment-380 Freakin love it. Not just cuz I love you but this was a quick, cold splash of a story– in a good way: more like the kind of splash from the sink (rather than the irksome booty splash from the toilet bowl) that although cold& a bit shocking*, is definitely refreshing… Thanks for pushing it out :) haha…. Though it seems that like Paul, you didn’t have to push very hard– instead it seems to have just eased out after some deliberate thinking. That’s skill. Thanks for sharing!!!!!

*by shocking I mean the language and unexpected moments that made me smile while reading… For instance the boss being a woman- broke my initial assumption of correlating boss to man-might be just me that makes the assumption but oftentimes a woman boss for a man isn’t as prominent in media. Love the humor of this story about some real ish. Could say more about the merits of it but I won’t. ill just say-Kudos bro! For writing, period. You da bomb. ;)

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